RRLachhman

Harmony with in me you reside
still to adventure the world around
you left a void to be filled

You went to visit your friend
air holly messenger of the earthly mother
busy spreading the perfume of grass after rain
you travelled together
entering deep within
revealing the secrets of the wind

filling part of that emptiness with lightness and freedom
not yet satisfied you left again
seeking for another friend

fire daughter of the sun
leaping, creeping
her red flames hypnotizes with its rare beauty
sparkling in the night
she warms the heart and soul
driving away the cold

air and fire long time friends
united within
borrowing me confidence and passion

once more you abandoned me as excuse to bring me unbelievable gifts
this time you traveled far to seek a rarefying friend
water earth's veins
best friend and worst enemy of the sun
it  darkens the sky during a fight
preventing the sun to shine
and creating a rainbow while conciliating

Water found an ally in air and a competitor in fire
he washes away my guilt
and imprisons my memories into whitened cold frozen ground

friends closer than expected came knocking at the door
the news of my dear harmony  wondering around in search of a way to please me
came dragging them to me

they were earth and metal
earth as generous as ever offering shelter to whoever seeks it
food to whoever starves
decided to offer me all its delights and prosperity without hesitation
metal the other comrade is more about power and force
a solid steel
he lent me strength

Harmony my friend how could I ever thank you?
You ignite my heart, embellished my soul
you gave me more than I ever asked for
now I won't be able to be apart from you


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